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Mayonaka Densha -- Volume 14- 73

Volume 14- 73

3rd Jul 2013, 9:47 PM

Volume 14- 73
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HimitsuNotebook on 3rd Jul 2013, 9:47 PM

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Aaaaaaand THAT'S A WRAP FOLKS!

I've said it before and I'll say it again, this volume feels like it's taken years. It's probably to do with the copics, this being the first fully copic'd volume and I'm glad it worked out as well as it did, I definitely think that it's improved the look and feel of the artwork tenfold myself! :D

Things I'm working on now are trying to make my panels a little bigger to accommodate the scenery and dialogue (curse my tiny writing) and getting plenty of dynamic angles in there so I hope there can be a lot of it in Volume 15!

I hope that you enjoyed this volume despite the fact that I felt like it was a bit of a slow one, we'll be wrapping up the Jessica backstory once and for all next time in Volume 15, leave any comments or critiques below, I'd love to hear 'em! ^_^



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Rinkel on 4th Jul 2013, 1:27 AM

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I think I liked this volume best so far simply because it was like your art just evolved tenfold with the addition of the copics. It was amazing, definitely.

I can't wait for volume 15, this is one of my favorite comics.

HimitsuNotebook on 4th Jul 2013, 3:08 AM

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Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that you think my artwork has improved! ^o^

JustNoPoint on 4th Jul 2013, 12:33 PM

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One thing I notice you can work on as well is making sure the panels, images, and word balloons lead the reader's eyes across the page.

Sometimes you stack a lot of panels within groups of panels and it gets a bit confusing to know which reads 1st.

But yeah, artwise you have really grown. Keep up the great work! I look forward to the next volume!

HimitsuNotebook on 5th Jul 2013, 4:43 PM

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Thank you very much! And yeah I know my pages can be a bit cluttered, I'm slowly working on trying to get them to flow a little better ^_^
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