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Mayonaka Densha -- Volume 14- 71

Volume 14- 71

25th Jun 2013, 10:17 AM

Volume 14- 71
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HimitsuNotebook on 25th Jun 2013, 10:17 AM

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It's not been long since the last page but since I had this one all nice and done and Volume 14 is nearly done (My god it feels like I've been working on this one an ice age) I figured that I might as well, only about a page and a half to go now, wooooo! :D

The top panel was originally a shot of Camille's feet but at the suggestion of my dad, I drew another version of this page with no dialogue for potential retail as I didn't want to sell the one in my comic but I much preferred the establishing shot of the outside of Le Chat Noir to her poorly drawn feet so ended up using that instead.

I also turned the full panel in to a gif, whadda you know?



See the panel itself was originally a lot bigger, I had to cut it down a bit to fit in the slot there.



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JustNoPoint on 25th Jun 2013, 11:42 AM

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You've really improved a lot while I was away!
This look really good! I doubt I'd be able to read your entire archive. Do you have a recommended good place to start?
Perhaps you can also make some "previously on" pages before new chapters?

HimitsuNotebook on 26th Jun 2013, 3:53 PM

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Thank you very much! :D

And I'm working on a sort of "previously on" page because I do worry that the length scares new readers away. ^_^

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mjkj on 26th Jun 2013, 8:25 PM

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Wow, I think that is a great comic :)

Thank you.

<-- Well, this new reader here (*points left*) was not scared by the archive...

...only thing I had trouble with sometimes was the order in which to read the panels - and sometimes it felt like if there was a panel missing. But I made it :)

PS: I really like the gif :)

HimitsuNotebook on 26th Jun 2013, 10:47 PM

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Thank you very much! It always makes me very happy when someone goes through the entire archive ^_^

and duly noted, I'll try and space my panels out in a more readable way in the future
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