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Mayonaka Densha -- Volume 14- 49

Volume 14- 49

12th Nov 2012, 5:14 PM

Volume 14- 49
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HimitsuNotebook on 12th Nov 2012, 5:14 PM

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Oh and then there's the wide spread implementation of plumbing, flush toilets and electricity, telephones, the sinking of the Titanic, cars, World War One~! I hope you're ready for them suffragette rallies Tom, because be damned if Hats isn't going to chain herself to a few fences.



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jas on 14th Nov 2012, 4:03 AM

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This is a very nice, tender page.

Constructive comments: The first couple of frames' order was a little tricky to figure out but I did so pretty easily.

Also, I did have to go to the previous page to see what was up with Jack's involvement in this page, as there wasn't exactly a transition. So I'd suggest making clearer transitions in the future, perhaps.

Aside from that, the art is quite pleasant. By that, I mean for a page with a lot of frames, it's very clear what's going on with this page and the overall fun, romantic mood shines through. The inking is very detailed and the shading is excellent. Good stuff!
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